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Eleni's Quest (Peplum Muscle), part 1

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'Oh mighty Hera, queen of heaven, please hear me. I travelled three days to visit your temple. I came all the way from Armenoi with our only goat. I will offer it to you, as you are the goddess of marriage. You are my only hope. Please hear my plea!'

Eleni took a deep breath, and wiped the tears from her eyes.

'A messenger from the army told me that Mikkos, my good husband, has been taken prisoner in the war against the Persians. I am desperate, powerful Hera! Please, give me strength in these times of sorrow! I am just an ordinary, weak woman and I don’t know what to do without my man. I can’t face the world without him. Please give me strength!' Eleni broke and fell to the floor, sobbing.

When she left the sanctuary, she still had tears in her eyes. A woman approached her. She was tall, voluptuous and beautiful. It was hard to estimate her age.

'Are you feeling better, daughter?' the woman asked.

'Not really… I hope Hera has heard me.'

The woman smiled at her. 'Don’t worry, Eleni, she has heard you. And she will give you what you asked for. But the goddess also wants you to act yourself. So here is the deal: you will receive your husband’s strength, so you will be as strong as you and him combined. And every time you defeat a man, the power of that man will be added to yours as well. So you can increase your strength, but that is up to you.'

'What? Defeat a man? Why? Why do I have to increase my strength?'

The woman didn’t smile anymore. 'That’s what you asked for, didn’t you?' she snapped. 'You asked for strength. If you wanted something else, you should have asked for something else!' She walked away with big strides. 'Foolish mortals,' she muttered.

'But…' Eleni stammered. She didn’t fully realize what just had happened, but she knew it was something important.

She dropped to her knees as something struck her. A wave of pleasant feelings washed through her body. It took only a few moments, it soon faded. When she stood back up, she felt a bit different. As if everything was lighter. She examined her arm. It looked a bit toned. She lifted the bottom of her peplos to examine her calves. They seemed to be a bit rounder as well.

She started the long walk home, wondering what had just happened to her. She was surprised she didn’t feel tired anymore. She hadn’t felt that good in days. 'I feel like I can walk on for hours!' she said.

And that was just what she did. She didn’t notice that it was becoming dark and that the road was deserted. There was just one other person, walking ahead of her. She passed the man. He picked up speed so he was walking alongside her.

'Well hello. A beautiful young woman, alone on this lonely road… Where are you going?'

Eleni stopped and looked around her. She cursed herself for being so inattentive. 'Please, leave me alone,' she said.

The man smiled at her. 'I think you just noticed you are completely on your own. I can do with you whatever I want.' He put his hand in her neck and pulled her head towards his. He pressed his lips on hers.

Eleni was scared to death. 'Holy Hera, please help me,' she prayed in silence. She wrapped her hand around his wrist, and pulled his arm away. ‘Please, don’t do this to me!’ she cried.

'Ah, a fighter,' the man said mercilessly. 'I always like a bit of wrestling as foreplay.' He tried to hold her neck once more, but was unable to break Eleni’s strong grip.

Despite her fear, Eleni was surprised. She saw that the man was struggling, but it wasn’t really hard for her to hold him. He was able to move his arm, but he couldn’t break free.

Eleni tried twisting his arm and was amazed to find he couldn’t resist her. He spun around and whined in pain. They stood there for some moments. Then, she kicked him between his legs and he fell on the ground.

'Please,' he sobbed. 'I didn’t mean to hurt you. I was just playing.'

She kicked him in his side. 'No, you weren’t! Now get away or I…'

Before she could finish her sentence, he was back on his feet and ran off into the other direction. He was limping a bit.

She breathed heavily while she watched him go. She dried her face and could hardly believe she was safe. She was about to turn around when the wave of pleasure hit her again. She could feel her body grow a little. Too soon, it was over. Astounded, she looked at her arm and flexed it. It was surely bigger than it had been this morning!

'So this is what that woman meant,' Eleni said to herself. 'I guess I possess my own strength now, combined with the strength of Mikkos and that pig.' She looked at the arc of her bicep and wondered: ‘Am I really stronger than two men?’

She walked on for some time. Although she still didn’t feel tired, she stopped when she passed a small tavern. There were no other buildings in sight. It was almost dark now and she didn’t want to take any risks. She opened the door and saw a dimly lit room with six men in it. One of the men approached her. ‘I am sorry, but there is no place for women in this tavern.’

Eleni stared at him. ‘What?’

The man shrugged. ‘I am really sorry. But I think that women shouldn’t travel unaccompanied.’

Once again, Eleni started to cry. ‘But it was not my choice to travel like this. My husband has been taken prisoner during the war. So you can please make an exception? Please?’ she begged.

‘I am sorry,’ the man repeated, indifferent to her tears. ‘You will have to leave.’ He closed the door and Eleni had to take a step back.

She panicked when she imagined herself spending the night in the cold outside. But then she said to herself: ‘No! You don’t have to be meek and servile anymore. The goddess has given you strength. So go back in there and use it!’

She wiped the tears away, took a deep breath and opened the door once more. The man gave her an angry look. ‘You again? I’ve told you three times already: leave!’

Eleni looked at him defiantly. ‘And what if I don’t?’

He gave her a blank look. ‘I’ll have to use force.’

‘Maybe we can settle this in a more polite way. Let’s armwrestle. If you win, I’ll leave immediately. If I win, you rent me one of your rooms for the night.’

He looked her up and down and thought about this. Then he sighed. ‘Good. If that is what you want.’

As they sat down, the other men gathered around their table. Eleni grasped the man’s hand. For a brief moment, she was scared. She had seen men armwrestling several times, but she had never tried it herself. Was there some kind of strategy for this?

Before she could think any further, one of the other men counted: ‘One, two, three, go!’ and Eleni immediately felt the man push against her hand. It was weird that it wasn’t very hard for her to resist him. She almost giggled. I have to grow used to being stronger than any man, she thought to herself. She looked at her opponent. He clearly couldn’t believe he still hadn’t beaten her.

She winked at him. ‘Is that all that you’ve got?’ She looked him in the eye as she slowly pushed down his hand. When his hand touched the table, she released him and jumped up. ‘Yes!’

Almost immediately, his strength was added to hers. She closed her eyes and softly moaned.

The man didn’t notice. ‘That wasn’t fair! I wasn’t ready yet!’

She looked down at him. ‘We both know that isn’t true.’ She shrugged her shoulders. ‘But I don’t mind if you want to try again. Or you can pick one of your friends here to be my opponent. Maybe we can raise the bet? If I win, you give me a room for free.’

The man gritted his teeth. ‘Agreed.’ He looked at the other five man and pointed at one of them. He wasn’t the tallest, but he surely was the broadest of them all. ‘He’ll take my place.’

Eleni looked at him with confidence. He looked a lot stronger than the other man, but she possessed the strength of three men now, so she expected he would be no match for her. She sat down again and put her arm on the table. ‘I am ready!’

‘Don’t you need some time to recover?’ the broad man asked.

She laughed. ‘Recover from what? Are you afraid? Scared to be defeated by a woman?’

That was enough. He sat down and grasped her hand, which looked small compared to his. She noticed he was trying to squeeze her hand, but she didn’t feel much of it. In return, he gave his hand a little squeeze. He let out a little cry and his eyes widened. But he quickly recovered and started pushing without a further announcement.

‘You aren’t really fair fighters, aren’t you? I guess you have to use dirty tricks when you are as weak as you are.'

He just increased his efforts. He pushed and grunted, his face contorted with effort, but he couldn’t move Eleni’s arm. She slammed his hand down on the table. ‘Oops. I hope I haven’t broken anything!’

She leaned back and closed her eyes. ‘Yes! Give me more strength! I am ready,’ she whispered. The feeling of her strength increasing was quite addictive.

After his strength was added to hers, she looked around. ‘Anyone else who would like to try? No? You know what? I’ll take on two of you at the same time. And if I win, I will get the best room in this tavern for free, including breakfast tomorrow morning. What do you think?’

The six men looked at each other. They felt uneasy, because they didn’t understand what was going on. They conferred in a corner of the room for some moments. They returned and two men sat down at the table.

‘How are we going to do this, boys? One arm for each of you? Or both of you against my one arm?’

They agreed on the second option. The first man grabbed Eleni’s hand and waited until the other man put his hand on top of it. Eleni counted to three and they started pushing. ‘Oh, very good! I feel a bit more resistance than I did in the first two matches. But it’s still not much though.’ She looked at them and smiled. ‘You are looking very cute when you are struggling hard.’

The two man cursed, the other four yelled at them, but they couldn’t push any harder. Eleni moved her hand from right to left and back, as if they weren’t even pushing. ‘Maybe this isn’t a fair fight. Do you boys want to use both hands?’

After her remark, it was quiet for a moment. Everybody stared at her. Then, they both added their left hand and pushed and pulled with all that they had got. It was actually the first time Eleni could feel serious resistance. She gritted her teeth and doubled her effort. Out of the corner of her eye she saw her bicep swell with power, a vein appearing on top. She followed the vein to her forearm, which was bulging with newfound muscle. The size of her muscles scared her a bit. But at the same time, it emphasized her superiority and gave her a boost. Eleni smiled through clenched teeth. With a growl, she pushed harder than ever before, her knuckles white with the grip she had on the man’s hand. The four arms started shaking, the men were intimidated by the very sight of her bulging bicep. Slowly, their hands were pushed down.

As soon as they touched the table, one of the other men shouted: ‘All together! She won’t be able to resist the six of us!’

Eleni backed up for a moment. The feeling of a double dose of strength added to hers was even more intense. She felt so strong! She quickly calculated she had the strength of six men now. So she wasn’t really concerned about the six men that rushed towards her. If she could prevent them from fighting her all at the same time, she would be fine.

Eleni reached for the man closest to her. She was surprised how light he felt. In one swift movement, she lifted him above her head and tossed him at two of the other men. The three remained laying on the ground. The other three stopped in their tracks, amazed how easily she had taken out three of them. With a big smile on her face, Eleni stepped towards them and they cowered backwards. With each step she took her shoulders became broader, her arms bigger, her legs more muscular. ‘Anyone else who wants to try?’ she asked. The three men were almost crying when their backs touched the wall.

Eleni calmly reached out and lifted two of them high into the air. ‘You are as light as babies,’ she said, while she examined her thick arms with satisfaction. ‘I could hold you up there forever. But I won’t waste my time on you.’ She banged their heads together and dropped them on the floor. She looked at the only man who was still standing. It was the man who had told her to leave. ‘I suggest you prepare my room. And don’t even think about attacking me when I am asleep, because I will break all the bones in your body if you do!'

The man swallowed hard, nodded and rushed off.

She woke up after a good sleep. She stretched out her arms above her head. When she saw the cords of muscle, she remembered what had happened the day before. ‘Oh, and this is just the beginning,’ she said to herself. ‘From now on, I will only grow stronger.’

She ran her hands over her thighs. There was thick, solid muscle everywhere. She couldn’t stop caressing herself. Her hands wandered upwards, to her stomach. Small ridges separated her abdominal muscles. She had seen those on male athletes, sometimes, but she had never realized she had abs herself! She twisted her torso, watching with delight as the muscles danced under her taut skin.

She moved her right hand to her left shoulder. She ran her hand over the ball of muscle for some time, and then moved it into the direction of her head. She was a bit surprised to find a hard slab of muscle between her shoulder and her neck. ‘I now have muscles I didn’t know that even existed!’

She kept exploring her improved body for quite a while. ‘I am massive now. It’s impossible for me to imagine what I will look like a few days from now.’

After some more touching and caressing, she forced herself to stand up. ‘If I keep on walking, I could be back home in Armenoi before the night falls,’ she thought.

She put on her sandals and her peplos. The loosely fitting cloth could easily contain her swollen body, but her sensational arms were left bare

During breakfast, she found that she had to eat much more than usual. ‘It makes sense,’ she told herself. ‘My body is so much bigger now, I need more food.’ She called for the man, who tried to stay as far away from the strong woman as he could. She ordered him to bring her more bread and cheese.

Then, she realised something was wrong. ‘Why am I thinking about going home?’ she said. ‘Am I going to sit there and wait until Mikkos returns? I am not that weak and scared woman anymore! Hera has given me all this heavenly strength; I should use it and go on free Mikkos myself. After all: who is going to stop me?’

It took her some time to get used to this whole new idea. Then, she asked the man for the nearest harbor. ‘Well, that’s Knossos, of course. It’s only a half day’s walk from here; a little less for someone as strong as you, probably.’

Eleni finished her meal and left. When she was close to Knossos, she passed a house where a lot of people had gathered. She asked a man what was going on.

‘Haven’t you heard, stranger? Tomorrow we have to feed the Minotaur. Five young boys and five young girls have been selected by fate. The youngest daughter of this house is one of them. She is only five years old.’

‘Oh no!’ Eleni exclaimed. ‘That is terrible! Is there nothing that can be done? Is there someone who can kill this Minotaur?’

‘Where do you come from, woman? Have you never heard of the Minotaur? It is a monster, half man, half bull. A combination of rage and muscles. Many brave men have tried to track it down in its Labyrinth and kill it. But the Minotaur has slaughtered them all. No one ever returned. There is simply no man strong enough to withstand the monster.’

‘Maybe you need a strong woman,’ she replied. She grabbed the man and lifted him into the air with one arm. ‘Maybe I am that strong woman.’

The other people realized something was going on outside the house. Soon a small crowd formed around Eleni. They saw the man, dangling helplessly in the air, supported by the mighty arm of a woman. ‘Is she going to take on the Minotaur?’ they whispered.

Eleni put the man back down on the ground. The crowd made her feel uncomfortable. She wasn’t used to speaking in front of a group. So she picked a woman about her own age and talked to her, which made it easier. ‘Yes, I might may able to help you. But I need more information. How strong do you the Minotaur is, compared to a normal man?’

The answers varied. Everyone agreed the monster was inhumanly strong, but they didn’t have accurate information. Some thought he was as strong as ten men, others said twenty.

‘Just to be certain, I need twenty of your best men,’ Eleni told them. ‘Do you have a palaestra here in Knossos? Yes? Please come with me and show me the way!’

She was a bit surprised that without further discussion, the whole crowd followed her to the wrestling school. She saw there were about ten wrestlers training there. ‘Perfect!’ she said. She picked ten strong looking men from the crowd and asked them to join the wrestlers. When the twenty men had gathered, she told them to line up.

‘I will wrestle each one of you separately. As I am already much stronger than you are, I am sure it will take me just a couple of moments to overpower each one of you. And because this will make my strength increase even more, it will incredibly easy for me by the time I’ve reached the last one of you. But even though you know resisting me is completely futile, please give me everything you’ve got!’

Everybody listened to her in amazement. How could this young women be so self-confident? Sure, her muscles were much bigger than those of the biggest wrestler, but she was still a woman. Eleni was surprised as well. She usually liked to disappear in a crowd, but now all these people were listening to her, and obeying her.

She started with the first wrestler. He grappled her and tried to push her to the ground, but she just stood there. When she had enough of his weak efforts, she put her hands on his shoulders and simply pushed him down. He tried to escape, but found that he couldn’t. Her grip was too strong, the strength she was exerting was way too much for him. Very soon, he found himself with his shoulders pinned to the ground. Eleni smiled at him as she felt his strength flowing through her. ‘Thank you,’ she whispered and she moved on to her next victim.

The crowd was astounded, but also excited, by the ease with which she defeated every single man. They thought these men were the strongest in town, but they were simply no match for this huge muscle woman.

It was also apparent that with each win, she grew even bigger and stronger. After ten wins, she needed just one hand to overpower a man. And when there were only five of them left, she challenged them to attack her together. They all wrapped their arms around her body and tried to pull her down. But Eleni just laughed and stood there, immovable like a granite statue.

After they had been pulling and pushing for some time, she decided to put an end to the fight. ‘Even if there were ten of you, you wouldn’t stand a chance. I am stronger than twenty men combined now,’ she boasted. One by one, she picked the men up and tossed them away like they were feathers. She let out a satisfied sigh when their strength was added to hers too.

She noticed a marble column, about her own height. She squatted in front of it and wrapped her arms around it. She grunted and stretched her legs. Slowly, the column rose from the ground. Yes! She was lifting it! She hoisted the column up and rested it on her massive thighs. She took a moment to regain her strength. Then she put one hand on the bottom of the column and her other hand on the top. She took a deep breath and lifted it above her head. She grinned and watched her arms in amazement. Her biceps were incredibly pumped. She could actually see the blood flowing through the thick veins, which pulsated with each heartbeat.

‘So, do you think I am strong enough to fight the Minotaur?’ she shouted.

The crowd roared. She dropped the column and the earth shook. Several people ran up to her. A woman dropped to her knees in front of Eleni. ‘Please save my child! You have the power to kill that monster!’

Eleni understood this was the mother of the five-year-old girl. She talked to some people to find out where she could find the entrance to the Labyrinth. She noticed that several people were caressing her muscles. It was strange. She never liked getting attention and tried to be invisible for the rest of the world. But things were different now. She loved their admiration. She could get used to this. She brought up her arm and flexed, making an intimidating mountain of muscle rise towards the sky. ‘My muscles are really big, don’t you think? Your arms look like twigs compared to these boulders. But do you think they are big enough to kill the Minotaur?’

‘I really hope so,’ an old man said, as he lightly touched her arm. ‘Now, let me show you the entrance of the Labyrinth.’ She let him lead the way, and the whole crowd followed them. After some time, they approached an impressive structure. Steep walls rose high into the air. They were more than six times Eleni’s height. The walls stretched out to the left and the right.

‘Wow. This is really big!’ she said.

‘It has to be,’ the old man replied. ‘The Minotaur is very strong, and this is the only way to keep him inside.’

‘But you will have to open it to let the children in, don’t you? How does that work?’

‘Ah, we have a solution for that. We are almost there.’

Eleni saw it from a distance. The gate was even higher than the walls. As they approached the gate, she noticed a carving. It showed a group of men - soldiers, judging by their armor - facing off against the Minotaur. The Minotaur itself was a beast as tall as two men, covered in muscle. It had the head of a bull and the body of a man. It held a man in one of its hands and swatted another soldier away with the other. A third man was impaled to one of his big horns. She looked up and saw ropes and big logs attached to the door. ‘How does it work?’ she repeated.

‘When it is time to open the gate, we first check if the Minotaur is near. You can see a small hole in there. If he is not, we use eight oxen to pull it open. The children go in and we quickly close it again.’ He peeked through the hole. ‘Everything seems to be safe... Well, as far as the Labyrinth can be safe. Are you ready to go in there?’

She sighed, as she watched the cruel scene on the carving once more. ‘I guess I am, yes.’ Despite the feeling of dread, as she looked at the Minotaur’s massive muscles she felt more than a little excited about adding all that strength to her own.

The ropes were attached to the oxen. ‘Wait!’ said Eleni. ‘Let me try to open the gate by myself first.’

‘Well, it is supposed to be heavy enough to keep the Minotaur inside,’ the man said, as he gave her a doubtful look.

‘I know, but I’m supposed to be stronger than him now,’ she said. She crouched down and put her hands under the bottom of the gate. All the muscles on her body grew bigger than ever before as she tried to stand up. But it quickly became clear she couldn’t. She collected all her strength and tried again, but to no avail. The gate moved up a bit, but she had to give up. ‘You’re right. It’s too heavy.’

She took a short break, until she was breathing normally again. Then, they opened the gate for her. She slipped through, and the gate immediately closed behind her.

Eleni looked around. The view didn’t differ much from the outside, with high walls all around her. She could see into the distance in some directions. In other directions, her view was blocked by the walls. The alleys were completely empty, except for some broken bones. She shivered. ‘Such a nice place,’ she mumbled. The sound of her own voice seemed too loud in this desolate environment.

‘Where should I go?’ she whispered. She decided it didn’t really matter, so she walked into one of the longer alleys, right in front of her. After a while, she could either go left, right or straight ahead. The view in all directions was almost identical. She shrugged her broad shoulders and turned left. ‘Straight ahead, first turn left,’ she repeated.

She didn’t know how long she had been walking through the maze. She could still remember each turn she had taken, but the list was becoming long. She had seen bigger alleys and smaller alleys, nothing else. Then, she heard a small sound. It was the first sound she heard since she had entered the Labyrinth, except for the sounds of her own voice and footsteps.

She stopped and turned around. It was hard to tell from which direction the sound came. She held her breath. Nothing. It was silent as usual. She breathed out and turned around again.

Suddenly, there were loud footsteps behind her, and heavy breathing. She quickly turned around. A monster was approaching her. His two big horns were aimed at her, his massive body moving incredibly fast. Eleni cried and spun around. She ran away from the onrushing Minotaur but knew she was far too slow. When she saw a small alley, she tried to squeeze herself through sideways. It was difficult because her body had expanded a lot in the past days. She almost got stuck - her left arm was still outside and the monster was approaching fast. She threw her body to the right and tumbled into another alley. At the same time, she felt a sharp pain in her left arm.

As she was laying on the ground, she examined her arm. There was a large scar on her upper arm, blood dripping from it. Fortunately, it wasn’t very deep. She sat up and ripped a ribbon of cloth from the bottom of her peplos and tied it around her arm. She could hear the monster raging at the other side of the small alley. His head was probably to big to fit through. She heard him kicking at the wall, but it was strong enough to withstand his powerful blows. After a while, the sounds stopped. That was even scarier. When would he find her again?

Eleni covered her face with her hands. ‘What have I done? I don’t stand a chance against this monster!’ She panicked even more when she realized she had forgotten the route back to the entrance. ‘I’m lost!’

She stood up and walked in a random direction. It didn’t really matter where she was going. She had only turned a couple of corners when she encountered the Minotaur again. And once again, she could only escape because she found an opening that was too narrow for the furious monster.

She was desperate. ‘Oh, mighty Hera, how could I ever think I was strong enough to beat this monster? I may possess enough strength to easily overpower an ordinary man, but the Minotaur has lived to kill his whole life! I am simply no match for him. And I can’t find my way out of this Labyrinth!’ She cried out loud. It didn’t matter to her anymore if he could hear her.
Several weeks ago, I invited everyone to send me requests for female muscle stories. One of the requests came from :iconrandomname4626:, who asked for this: Set in ancient Greece, a woman gets word that her husband was taken prisoner in war. She makes an offering to the gods and prays for them to give her strength in her time of sorrow, but her prayer is taken literally and she finds herself transformed into a massively muscular demi-goddess, and sets out to rescue her husband.

Because the deadline for sending requests was 22 November, I didn't think of this idea (or any other idea) very much. Until :iconfemalemuscle: announced that their monthly theme for November is Peplum Muscle.

As these two things seemed to go together pretty well, I decided to start working on this story. I gave randomname4626 access to the document, and he gave me valuable suggestions, improved my writing on several occasions, and added a lot of 'overly detailed muscle descriptions' (as he would say himself :) (Smile) ). We also had fun discussing all kinds of story ideas.

I hoped it would be a short story I could finish within a couple of days, but the story only kept growing, so I decided to publish the first part while working on the rest of the story. I hope I'll be able to publish the rest before the end of the month.

:iconjarhead300099: made sketches based on this story. Here is Eleni, grieving for her husband  Eleni's Quest 1 by jarhead300099. And this is Eleni after she defeated the men in the pub  Eleni's Quest 2 by jarhead300099.

By the way: you can still send me your requests! I will still pick at least one story idea to turn into a story. Check it out here: 500 watchers: request a female muscle story!

Other parts:  Eleni's Quest (Peplum Muscle), part 2A ray of sunlight struck Eleni and it felt like the goddess herself touched her. She sat up and dried her eyes. ‘No,’ she said. ‘I shouldn’t be crying like a little baby. The generous goddess has given me awesome powers and I am going to use them.’ She thought for a moment. ‘Until now, it was enough to use my physical strength. I have become so strong that no one could resist me. Maybe I should explore what else I can do with my strength?’
She lifted the bottom of her peplos and examined her giant thighs. ‘Until now, I mostly used my arm strength. I wonder what these pillars can do?’ She crouched down and her thighs grew even bigger. Eleni took a deep breath and launched herself into the air. She was surprised how high she could jump. Almost three times her own height, she guessed. ‘Wow, my legs are really strong! If I can jump this high, I suppose I am also able to run very fast.’
She tucked up her peplos and ran away.
  Eleni's Quest (Peplum Muscle), part 3It didn’t take Eleni long to reach the Anatolian coast. When she reached the shore she started running at high speed. Only after a while she realized she had no idea where she should go. She stopped, and jumped into the air. She was delighted to find that she could jump very high now, about ten times her own height. When she landed, she sank into the ground up to her knees. She jumped again and looked into another direction. Far in the distance she spotted a group of houses.
She ran towards them and arrived only moments later. A man shook his head in disbelief as the muscular woman seemed to appear out of nothing. ‘Tell me where I can the nearest Persian army camp!’ she demanded.
‘You are Greek, aren’t you? I won’t tell you anything!’
‘Ah, you don’t seem to understand,’ she said with a smile. ‘Is this yours?’ She pointed to simple house with clay walls behind him. The man nodded. While she kept smiling at him, she
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Very neat. I have always wanted to see a girl with "strength copying" powers rather than strength drain. Cool stuff so far!